Photo Prompt ©️ Ted Strutz
The Last Expedition of Mavis Richter
Day 1: Equipment arrived safely. Spent the day assembling telescope and yurt. Should have requested extra blankets. Nights are below zero now.
Day 2: New telescope is powerful – felt like I was floating among the stars last night. No unusual activity noted. Should have requested back-up generator. Old one is on the fritz.
Day 3: Strange lights in the sky after midnight. Generator died. Should have requested kindling. Tried to build a fire. Not much here will burn.
Day 4: Lights were back. Seemed to be a dozen. Should have requested rescue flare gun.
Day 5 : Help ……..
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Written for Rochelle Wisoff’s Friday Fictioneers
Oops! Looks like someone made contact with the aliens. Nicely done.
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Thanks. Was my link broken? When I tried it I got the OOOps page. I posted twice and have asked Rochelle to remove them both so I can repost.
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Hi Candy,
The link still wasn’t working quite right but I think I have it working. And love the story. You feel Mavis’ descent. Chilling.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks for your help and kind words, Rochelle!
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It slowly gets worse and worse for Mavis. Well done!
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awesome idea to have the journal.
and the day 5 was powerful…..
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Step by step to disaster. Well done.
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Thanks 🙂
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Well written; pace works well. Help indeed!
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Thanks so much 🙂
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